Elemental, Ipod, Gloves

NAME:
→ Jigen-Tou
→ Wind Slicer
→ Flame Alchemy
→ Sand Alchemy

TYPE:
→ Alchemy: Elemental
→ Alchemy: Elemental (Flame)
→ Alchemy: Elemental (Earth)

LEVEL:
→ 3

FORM:
→ Ipod, Metal backing
→Sword
→ As the name implies, they are Flame Transmutation Gloves. They are white gloves, that are made out of "pyrotex/ignition" cloth. Unique Flame transmutation circles are embroidered onto the gloves to remove the need to draw one.
→ It is in the form of a ring on his finger. chizzled into the stone is a transmutation cirlcle that allows Alex to manipulate Minerals. This removes the need to draw a circle.

BRIEFING:
→ The transmutation array is simple in theory. It uses preexisting sound making the air around it vibrate faster causing it to become louder and travel faster. The way he does it is the alchemy when activated compresses air in either a thin strip or a blob of sorts. When he does this the air helps the sound travel faster like a speaker and causes it to hit the target sharply. The transmutation circle itself is a simple circle with a square and triangle inside. Inside the triangle pints are runes for Air sound and unity. On the inside of the square is several circles representing the sound waves. The second ring in the circle allows for it to change frequency’s and affect a wider area of effects. The inner ring allows it to make the frequency that is inconspicuous but hypnotizes the victim into doing simple tasks like a pet zombie.
→ The transmutation circle on the gloves are unique Flame transmutation circles. They compromise of two circles, one inside the other, and two triangles intersecting each other inside the outer circle and going inside the inner circle. There is a Flame emblem on top of the transmutation circle, and on the bottom within the two circles is a silhouette of a small lizard like creature.

The techniques that involve the gloves are all offensive and some can destroy entire areas, if used by a skilled Flame alchemist. The Flame can be used to burn, if hot enough melt or if even hotter incinerate targets. The Flame can also be used to create explosions adding a more dangerous element to the user's arsenal.

In order to use the gloves, the user must be skilled in Flame alchemy. Flame Alchemy is the manipulation of the concentration of oxygen in the air surrounding the target, raising its density to a level at which it becomes combustible and creating narrow pathways of oxygen through which can direct the ensuing flame birthed by the spark. This process is caused by the user rubbing their fingers together while wearing the glove.

There is one major weakness however, the gloves can't be used in areas that is raining or low in humidity. This can be countered however with a already live spark, such as a ember or a lighter.
→The Transmutation circle is on a ring. it
→

Flame Alchemy:

OR take out the spoiler and describe it in detail.
→

Flame Alchemy Gloves:

OR take out the spoiler and describe it in detail.
→

Sand Alchemy:

OR take out the spoiler and describe it in detail.
→

Sand Alchemy Ring:

PICTURE:
→

Sound Alchemy:

→

Sound Alchemy Ipod:

Wind Alchemy:

[spoiler=Wind Alchemy Sword][img] http://www.hanzoswords.com/assets/images/kadaj4.jpg

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SPECIAL ABILITIES:
→ Jigen-tou - He is able to reverberate the sound coming from his ipod. The frequency depending on how high can hit you like a bunch. The louder the sound is played the more it will hurt. The the blows are weak but the tell tale sign is that the person about to be hit will hear the noise used to create it become extremely loud before they are hit. where the sound comes from must be pointed away from him or he will be hit. The sound now travels in a area of encounter type movement. The sound travels in a dome where the top is the strongest. So to get the strongest impact he still has to point it at someone. In one word it would be described as a shockwave.
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→Wind Slicer-By vibrating the tuning fork bladded Katana Alex can vibrate the air molecules around the blade itself. when that is swung it makes a current of air that is not inherently harmful at first. but the after effect leaves one with the appearence of wind swept Hair and clothes. The real alchemy that can be used is to capture a certain pitch and vibrate the sword faster. This makes the slightly Jagged edge vibrate. Thus the blade acts like a chain saw. The vibration makes it saw through materials like wood easier.

→ Unexpected Flame: The gloves allow the user to use Flame alchemy at pretty much no risk. The gloves guarantee the user won't burn their hands, and can be used for practical uses that resist high amounts of heat.THe Fire is now a color of blue on the pinticale of becoming white
→ Sand Control: Alex would use his alchemy to control the silicon in sandr to make shapes and forms. The Silicon forms small bonds which when used together can make the shapes. the sand though susseptable to wind can be hardened into a semi hard object slowing and possibly blocking attacks as they come. This is also possible to make the gas move through the wind while maintaing certain properties. Alex controls the sand to make sheilds or suffocate certain people. he can also expand his sand by crushing rocks which then also become part of the alchemy. The downside is it is rather week and needs to have a thick layer of sand to protect himself. he carries a various amount of gourds filled and made of sand on his waist and linning his jacket. he steps on these gourds and uses the circle on the ring to make the forms. another downfall is execution and speed of reaction.

REVISE

Sound can't cut. No idea where you got that idea from. Maybe change it to blow people's eardrums?
ALSO I'm confused where's your second ability..?

Revised and such

{REVISE}

An example of how his trans app is changed would be this. Note how level 2 stuff is added in one color to the app that Toss already has. Just showing you for future reference

I give the same notes I did here as I did on your app about his abilities.

• For his sound-punch, specify that the speakers must be pointed away from him otherwise he would also get hit by the attack.

Once thats done, you're good.

{APPROVED}

For future reference, you will add your level 3 things to this app as well. Obviously in a different color.

Bump

Archived.

BUMP

Some serious re-organisation is necessary, but mainly this is so Spot can revamp the Jade-Blowout issue, on request. I've also eliminated the other topic, and copy-pasted all the information into this one, for simplicity's sake so there's less arsing about.

The other profile has been kept in archives just in case something goes wrong in between. If I get shouted at, I'll move it back again.

REVISE

I'm not even going near some of the other issues at the moment, but for starters, please fix up the damn presentation. Your formatting ensures that there is no possible way in hell this app can or will ever make sense. Change that for starters.

Next. Let's work with the jewels alchemy first. I'm fairly confident Dai said you can't do this in whichever or whatever thread, but, yeah. No jewel-making! Takes too much pressure. So that'll have to be retconned. I'm sure you had simply sand manipulation there earlier...

Numerous horrific grammatical and spelling errors aside, whilst your jigen-tou, sand manipulation and flame manipulation special abilities are fine, for lack of a better word, the hypersensitivity gig needs to be cut completely.

For starters, it's alkahestry as it pertains to the body. I see NO mention of this whatsoever.

The random strengthening needs to be cut completely as it's FAR too many abilities. This is a single transmutation.

I'm pretty confident that you're not going to be able to manipulate every single sense. I myself have got alchemy which actually manipulates the bioelectrical system of the body and removes all sense of pressure and pain, and that's a WHOLE branch of alchemy alone. I'm going to have to ask you to limit this to ONE sense per allotted ability.

Keep in mind that some senses are linked, though. So if you disable smell, taste will also be severely stunted.

Finally, especially with this amount of versatility in a single alchemical branch, I don't think it's likely you'll be able to permanently stunt a function of the nervous system. Perhaps on NPCs, if you just include a single sense, but definitely not for PCs. If it does get approved, you'll have to be VERY careful not to autohit, and confirm it with the other character's player beforehand.

Not sure how necessary the post-cooldown-things are.

There is still potential here, however. Just have to work at it, find the diamonds in the rough. And believe me, this is just about the roughest rough I've ever seen, but you should be able to get something out of it.

Looks okay to me.