Modern Day Alchemists
WHY AREN'T YOU SIGNED IN!$#%@? -sends Aurel after you-
Latest topics
» Best wishes
Thu Jul 19, 2018 5:36 pm by Iris

» This is the end I fear
Fri Nov 15, 2013 3:07 pm by Reila Tsukino

» Pumpkin Spice
Wed Nov 06, 2013 4:13 pm by Rhea Stevenson

» BARBERSHOP BRUNCH, BRO'S.
Wed Nov 06, 2013 12:54 pm by Wolfgang Murinyo

» Training Private Daw (Open to Amestrian Militants Only)
Mon Nov 04, 2013 6:07 pm by Dawsic

» AKI'S NEW FORUM
Mon Oct 21, 2013 12:59 am by Silvac

» Baldursdóttir, Ymir [done]
Thu Oct 17, 2013 5:56 pm by Jay Furor

» Practice Makes PERFECTION
Mon Oct 14, 2013 11:19 am by Zayne O'Reilly

» Just a Checkup
Thu Oct 10, 2013 8:55 am by Crassus

» Arm And A leg away... (Open)
Thu Oct 10, 2013 2:07 am by Silvac

Who is online?
In total there is 1 user online :: 0 Registered, 0 Hidden and 1 Guest

None

[ View the whole list ]


Most users ever online was 74 on Wed Sep 10, 2014 4:45 am
Join us on Facebook!
 

Battle Flashlights--No you didn't read that wrong.

Go down

Battle Flashlights--No you didn't read that wrong.

Post by Bronze Degan on Thu Sep 13, 2012 4:43 am


...........................................................................
CASE FILE: Custom Weapon

Marcus "Bronze" Degan
...........................................................................
NAME:
→ Dancer and Prancer

TYPE:
→ Twin Metal Tubes

FORM:
→ Flashlights

...........................................................................

BRIEFING:
→ These custom made flashlights are made with the sturdiest materials currently made by man with chemically treated diamond to serve as the actual focusing lens for the devise. They are just over a foot in length, matte black in color with grips made to fit snugly in the mans hand. They are powered by state of the art lithium ion batteries that can hold a charge for well over fifteen hours of continues use. These flash lights produce just over 1 megajuel of energy a piece.

PICTURE:
Spoiler:

...........................................................................

SPECIAL ABILITIES:

→ These babies are nearly indestructible by conventual means. Able to with stand forces exceeding 2 tons in total weight as well as being completely sealed and water resistant, it takes a hell of a lot of effort to ether disable or destroy them.


...........................................................................


Last edited by Bronze Degan on Tue Oct 02, 2012 12:04 am; edited 1 time in total
avatar
Bronze Degan
A DUBIOUS GENERAL

Posts : 254
Points : 121
Location : Wandering the world

-Case File-
Level: 3
Rank: General De Gelemorte
Writer: Bro

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Battle Flashlights--No you didn't read that wrong.

Post by Guest on Thu Sep 13, 2012 2:17 pm

REVISE

1] I'd advise removal of Xerxian jade. There's no real benefit to using it. Alchemically treated carbon steel is stronger, and for the lens, diamond would work far better. Considering its nature as fluctuating in and out of canon with a status I'm trying to confirm with Aki currently, removing it would just be the simplest thing to do. It's a pointless novelty which does nothing but downgrade item quality.

2] No need for the "No, you didn't read that wrong". I know it's a tad petty, but it just unnecessarily clutters up the title. Throw it in description or something.

Concept and idea is otherwise good.

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Re: Battle Flashlights--No you didn't read that wrong.

Post by Guest on Sun Sep 16, 2012 5:54 am

Archive date is the 27th.

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Re: Battle Flashlights--No you didn't read that wrong.

Post by Bronze Degan on Tue Oct 02, 2012 12:06 am

Ready for review
avatar
Bronze Degan
A DUBIOUS GENERAL

Posts : 254
Points : 121
Location : Wandering the world

-Case File-
Level: 3
Rank: General De Gelemorte
Writer: Bro

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Battle Flashlights--No you didn't read that wrong.

Post by Reila Tsukino on Thu Oct 11, 2012 5:33 pm

APPROVED

That didn't take ten days or anything 8D

.....................................................................................................................................

This is a temporary signature. 8D
avatar
Reila Tsukino
PENDING

Posts : 2266
Points : 1089
Location : Fort Briggs

-Case File-
Level:
Rank:
Writer:

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Battle Flashlights--No you didn't read that wrong.

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum