Jocelyn's Weaponized Rock Alchemy

NAME:
→ Weaponized Rock

TYPE:
→ Alchemy: Elemental: Earth


LEVEL:
→ Uno

FORM:
→ Jocelyn has two copies of her transmutation circle on the tops of her fingerless gloves; the circle is sewn in with black thread.


BRIEFING:
→ Jocelyn thought it best to master an alchemy that would be effective in almost any combat enviornment. Therefore, she chose the basic stone. Jocelyn, by understanding what type of stone she's manipulating and how much she has and needs, can create two very basic structures from them: spikes and walls. Jocelyn, at any time, has to be focused on where exactly she's transmuting, meaning she must be able to see it. She can't transmute an object she's not touching unless said object is in contact with what she's in contact with and is of the same material. Until a transmutation is complete, her hands can not come out of contact with the object. That being said, it is, in essence, a very basic alchemy. Know what you're transmuting and how much, know what exactly you're transmuting it into, and shape what it is.

Jocelyn's biggest weakness is the weight of her weapons. Because of this, she must weight train to be able to wield her special weapons. Jocelyn also can't transmute an object she can't see, even if she's touching an object connected to it, say like the opposite wall of a building that she wants spikes to come from. Can't do that. Jocelyn also has to know the composition of many different types of rock and stone to be able to manipulate properly. Her biggest strength however is its versatility, since it can be used in most combat zones and its protective strength as well as offensive.

PICTURE:
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Spoiler:

→ Jocelyn wears a pair of white fingerless gloves with red trim at the finger holes. On the back of her hand, there is the circle sewn into the very fabric with black thread.


SPECIAL ABILITIES:

→ Fists of Stone: There was one little trick that Jocelyn does love to use. She has developed the ability to transmute stone over her hands into glove like bricks. She has practiced using these gloves time after time after time and has become extremely proficient with them. The gloves have two ways of coming off: breaking from overuse or being reformed so that they can come off.

REVISE

1. Special Abilities: "The gloves have two ways of coming off: breaking from overuse or deconstruction by an alchemist (usually her)." -- Deconstruction of the stone she's created would be another ability. She can reform the rock again into something else not completely break it down into dust. I think you just got confused with the wording. ^_^
2. Briefing: "Jocelyn also can not manipulate metal or create new stone from the air or manipulate organic material like trees, even though it IS solid." --That is to be expected. You don't really need to say this. It would go against the entire science of alchemy. XD
3. Type: 'Elemental: Earth' I'd say.
4. Briefing: "Know what you're transmuting and how much, know what exactly you're transmuting it into, deconstruct, reconstruct, BAM!" -- Alchemy isn't deconstructing and reconstructing; it's just constructing with what's available at hand/within the circle period. Deconstructing is what Scar did and that's essentially an entirely different ability.
5. Briefing: The whole second paragraph just remove it. Save it for later abilities.
6. Briefing: You didn't tell me it's weaknesses and strengths. Like, rock is HEAVY so she has to weight train and the like.

Revised.

APPROVED

Good edit!