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Post by Guest Tue Sep 13, 2011 2:28 pm

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CASE FILE: Chimerae
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She wears a coat of color
Loved by some, feared by others
She's immortalized in young men's eyes

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FULL NAME:
→ Yvonne

AGE:
→ 22

SEX:
→ Female

BIRTH PLACE:
→ Vaingloria, Gelemorté

RACE/SPECIES:
→ Lizard,Dog,Shark,Snake,Human,Hydra

GENERATION:
→ Generation 4

DATE OF BIRTH:
→ February 24

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HEIGHT:
→ In centimeters. 165

WEIGHT:
→ In kilograms. 56kg

PICTURE:
Spoiler:

DESCRIPTION:
→ She is depicted with her hair in two pigtails, one long and one short, and she has two scars on her torso and her hip. Her left eye has a large tattoo of a bright blue flame. She wears a pair of knee high black boots with stiletto like heels, a black bikini top that is held by the fastening string around her neck, black short shorts with a light gray belt, and a black hooded jacket with a long back with a white star on the back. She has a tail of a dog that is hidden by her jacket and when she is mad she shows she has dog like ears matted down in her hair. She also has a alternate uniform which is basically the same thing but in white. It is used when she has a tan and then that is the only time she wears a different attire. She wears a pendant around her neck that holds a black diamond.

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PERSONALITY:
→ Around Her Family excluding Sal she is a calm individual. She tends to play around with hger crew mates and has been known to tease them relentlessly. She has a time when even she gets too comfortable around them and when that comes she tends to pound all she finds.
Around Sal she is well behaved. She dosent talk back and treats him like a little brother. She rather feels that without her around some would go to insanity.
She has a few friends on the boat and when she is around them she slacks off and does not do shit for anyone. She dosent take bull shit when she is around her friends. She has a tendancy to bite people with her Shark inhanced Jaw. She is rather cheerful most of the time and does not care who knows it but she knows on the ship nice girls get raped. She loves her family even her biological family the Rosario twins.
Wthn around Lucas she tends to make jokes. Jokes on there lifestyle to there apearence. She mostly teases Lily cause he is a guy as she knows. The fact that there dressed in drag dosent affect her. She actually encourages them to dress in drag.
When in a fight she is more like a feral dog. She goes for the kill acting irrationally most of the time. She feels fighting is a last resort. She is made to survive. Her regeneration from the hydra gets accelerated so that small wound seal up. She has the ability to do some miraculous things and her accuracy with a gun is to to be taken lightly.
She is known to say several phrases her favorite are ones of wisdom. She also takes one from confusioc and says it right before she kills someone. “The superior man, when resting in safety, does not forget that danger may come. When in a state of security he does not forget the possibility of ruin. When all is orderly, he does not forget that disorder may come. Thus his person is not endangered, and his States and all their clans are preserved.”

LOVE:
→ Girls
→ Guns
→ Animals she has a tie too.
→ Languages.
→ Alcohol
→ Her Cousin’s antics
→ Biting peoples arm’s off
→ Drugs
→ Motorcycles
→ Straight Jackets

HATE:
→ Idiots
→ Baths
→ Hate
→ Poverty
→ Being Called insane

DEEPEST SECRET:
→ (Delete if you don't have one)

IDOL:
→ (Delete if you don't have one)


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HISTORY:
→ Pools of blood surrounded a child. The child was no older than five or six years of age. AS she lay there unconscious on the ground, blood dripping down the drain a man came. This man was a rather psychotic man having made a chimera with all the most ferocious animals he could find. It was worse when he did it to his daughter. His wife having died giving birth to her was not there to stop him. As he picked her up he pressed a button. A large tile came up. It covered a good square portion of the lab. This was his ultimate transmutation. He had started researching Hydra’s the microscopic organism they were but they had properties that some could say were mythological at best. There regenerative powers were remarkable. As is a starfish but starfish died Hydra’s did not as easily. The little blighters were hard to come by and harder to manipulate. Taking after plants to an extent they were nearly untouchable.
But this man found a way. Walking to a huge tank he had enough Hydra to make half a person. And the best part is they could continue to reproduce once they were done. He had another animal in there. This one was a baby shark. Pressing his hands against the glass a blue glow emitting from it as a transmutation circle became visible apparently made into the glass. The Hydras began to combine with eachother forming a larger one the size of the shark. Then soon after a second light came. The hydras combined with the shark making it double in size. It gained a few features of the hydra but it was more contained in the shark. He decided to perform a test. Taking a knife he cut off a small piece of its dorsal fin. The piece he cut off regenerated after a few hours of video taped observation. It was perfect. The only killing machine with somewhat self replicating capabilities.
As he moved along he smiled now it was time to make his final creation and possibly his best. Knowing that combining two chimera was never attempted without some sort of failure he was glad he had made a few calculations. As he set his girl down with the knocked out shark he added a dog lizard and a snake chimera. This could be the ultimate weapon. He then performed the alchemy. The ring glowed red with energy as all three beings began to combine. Wind came back from it as his daughter his little girl became something much more powerful. Her body was now an a curse and a gift. As the smoke cleared from the sight his little girl was left there she had a tail and ears and as he picked her up rows of teeth greeted him. But alas that was twenty two years ago. She Is rather happy now working with pirates and knowing she can attain more power. After several years with them she has changed. she found she could not grow and began looking in the underground crime syndicates. She now has left the pirates and has begun to take interest in one such Yakuza.


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TRIVIA:
→ She has a rare blood type of AB negative
→ She has elongated teeth and a stronger muscles relative to her size.
→ She has regenerative skills along with a slowed aging process
→She is very flexible and can do many maneuvers without a problem
→ She has a tail and ears of a dog
→ She is related to the Rosario twins
Amestrian Drachman Gelmortian Creole and Aerugese


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ALIAS:
→ Spotlight

OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ Alex Corde

CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ Anjing Kampung

FACE CLAIM:
Code:
[b]Black★Rock Shooter/Yuusuke Matsuo[/b]/[i]Black★Rock Shooter[/i]

CUSTOM RANK:
→ Black Rock Shooter
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Post by Reila Tsukino Sun Sep 25, 2011 5:45 pm

Archive date is September 27th.
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Post by Shula Brighton Thu Dec 22, 2011 4:40 am

{REVISE}

RACE/SPECIES:
→ Lizard,Dog,Shark,Snake,Human,Hydra

Hokay, I'm assuming you picked hydra to try and get regeneration properties, but I'm gonna have to say that's not plausible here. Hydra are freshwater creatures that are only a few milimeters big and have to be taken apart under a microscope. But the reason a hydra can reconstruct itself is because it's such a genetically simple creature; it wouldn't help you regrow a lost arm and reconstruct bone, nor would it be a fast process. Besides, I'm assuming you chose lizard for regeneration as well, so the hydra would still be too small and not needed. Also, you mentioned human, but that is species. You forgot to mention which race of humans she comes from.

Personality:

"She has the ability to do some miraculous things and her accuracy with a gun is to to be taken lightly."

Um... miraculous things? With what, her gun? Her chimeric abilities? Her charming personality? What miraculous things? And I think you mean that her aim is not to be taken lightly, otherwise that implies that her skills are to be ignored.

Deepest Secret & Idol
→ (Delete if you don't have one)

*points to the parenthesis* Delete these if they're gonna stay blank.

History

I appreciate that you looked into hydra, but them being the primary focus still doesn't make much sense. They're microscopic and can regenerate themselves because they're only slightly more complicated than fresh water amoeba. Again, if you're already using the lizard for regeneration the hydra seems redundant. I really would rethink the hydra focus. And jsut to remind you, their aging and "immortality" traits are under debate and have yet to be conclusively proven. Furthermore, you said her father was greeted by rows of teeth. So... what? She ate him? Smiled broadly? You just skip from that to 22 years later without saying anything between lab to pirate. What's she been doing this whole time, or how did she find the pirates.

You also state that the Rosario twins are related to her, and also call Sal her cousin. How are they all related? And then that after several years she left the pirates. Your timeline makes no sense, Spot. The character is 22. She was transformed at 5 or 6, but then you said THAT was 22 years ago, which would make her 27 or 28. Just because your body is changed doesn't mean your age that you've been alive for does. So tell us how old she is and when these things happened.

How is she unable to grow? Height, aging, psychologically? If you are connecting that to the hydra aging, see comment above. And how has she changed, just in terms of her personality?


Languages
→ Amestrian Drachman Gelmortian Creole and Aerugese

Realistically, why does she speak or need to speak so many languages. You said she is born in Gelemorte, but didn't state that she is Gelemortian or what race she is to explain what languages she would logically speak. We're left to assume Gelemortian, but that doesn't explain the other three languages. And per previous discussions, Creole is not a viable option, so that needs to be taken off.
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Post by Dai Sun Jan 01, 2012 10:21 pm

Archive date is the 7th!
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