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Aiko's Custom Weapon

Post by Guest on Wed Oct 03, 2012 3:09 pm


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CASE FILE: Custom Weapon

Aiko Shimizu
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NAME:
→ Aquatic's Blade

TYPE:
→ Sword

FORM:
→ Giant War-Ulu

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BRIEFING:
This weapon that Aiko weilds in battle is made of a lightweight metal so that it is easily carried. There are three circles on the side of the weapon, near the handle, in a triangular fasion. It also has the same transmutation circle as Aiko has on her right arm on the opposite side of the weapon as where the circles are. Comparing the size of the weapon tip to tip with Aiko, it would be half as tall has her. The weapon itself is made of carbon steel and the blade is comprised of a strong yet cheap aluminum.

PICTURE:
Spoiler:

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SPECIAL ABILITIES:

→ N/A


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Last edited by Aiko Shimizu on Mon Oct 08, 2012 8:39 pm; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Revision)

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Re: Aiko's Custom Weapon

Post by Bronze Degan on Wed Oct 03, 2012 4:18 pm

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1) Grammar. Im having some trouble reading and understanding what your trying to say in this app.

2)Even light weight metals would cause this thing to not only be unweildly but tiring to use as well. My suggestion to you is to make it smaller.

Once the grammar is fixed ill give it another look.
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Post by Guest on Wed Oct 03, 2012 4:32 pm

Hopefully it's better now.

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Post by Bronze Degan on Wed Oct 03, 2012 11:51 pm

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1) What kinda metal? Tis easy enough to find something light weight on google. ^^ Carbon steel could work~

Other then that you did vary well^^ I likes~~
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Post by Guest on Thu Oct 04, 2012 9:50 pm

Edited it in.

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Post by Bronze Degan on Mon Oct 08, 2012 6:09 pm

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1) Graphene is like hella expensive, how did he afford enough to cover a blade?
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Post by Guest on Sat Oct 13, 2012 5:53 pm

It's been edited.

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Re: Aiko's Custom Weapon

Post by Bronze Degan on Tue Oct 16, 2012 4:33 pm

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1: Gimme blade dimensions please, how long it is, how wide. Things like that.
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Post by Reila Tsukino on Sat Oct 20, 2012 11:09 pm

APPROVED

Dimensions can be determined through the image.

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