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Post by Guest Fri Aug 12, 2011 11:58 pm

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CASE FILE: Alchemist/Cretan Militant {Spectre/Crown Alchemist}
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Better mad with the rest of the world than wise alone.
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FULL NAME:
→ Veil Rifter

AGE:
→ 17
SEX:
→ Male

BIRTH PLACE:
→ London

RACE:
→ Cretan

DATE OF BIRTH:
→ 8/10/1994


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HEIGHT:
→ 182.88

WEIGHT:
→ 90.7184 kg

PICTURE:
Spoiler:

DESCRIPTION:
→ Veil stands at six feet and 200 pounds and is built much like a athlete who does running. Heavily muscled in the torso and legs. His hair is black and white and styled to spike backwards and bangs that go over his chilling green eyes. His clothes consist of a Grey kimono with a black shirt and jogging pants with a black belt. His skin is lightly tanned but dark enough to hide where he is actually from. Veil wears a pair of red coverings over his arms that go down to the top of his fists, the front of the covering is solid steel with a heavy padding underneath allowing him to hit anything as hard as he wants without damaging his hands. Veil wears black mountain boots with steel toed tips allowing him to kick without hurting himself. In the Military Veil wears a normal uniform but keeps his gloves and boots despite dress code.


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PERSONALITY:
→ Veil is mostly a loner who sticks to his music, To people he is harsh and down putting with a Barb tongue and a cold nature who is only happy when he plays his music. Around other people he gets tense and hates large crowds when he can't see them all and tends to rely on his Alchemy to keep people away. Though he is a talented sound alchemist he would rather play simple music then use his power.

Veil has a twisted mind from grief and war and it snapped his mind causing him to have psycho moments and short term memory loss at times. It returns once the Psychosis passes but during the time he can easily turn on allies without any self control. Music again plays a part and seems to be able to keep the broken mind intact. To enemies he likes to punish them by hurting them as much as possible and takes his own issues out on his enemies. He enjoys experimenting with his Alchemy and in twisted moments will use actual people as guinea pigs for his Sound alchemy to see just how effective, On worst days he will use other Alchemist who are bound and gagged and see how much they can withstand by going with his weakest sounds and floats upwards to his most dangerous.

In the military Veil doesn't seem to listen to orders much unless he trusts the person and refuses to be someones tool and shield. When angry he finds a way to get back at people who used him and will leave them defenseless and even turn on them in battle. His loyalty falls in various areas and will even ignore the orders of a General if he feels he is just being used to save someones skin. Veil believes in Karma and will help those who have helped him in the past even walking into dangerous situations to help, however Karma goes two ways and will go through large amounts of trouble to get revenge on someone who betrayed him. Veil despises people who got to the top on politics and money and hates cowards and gutless officers even more.

LOVE:
→ Music, Alchemy, Rainy days, composing songs, studying and Learning new alchemy

HATE:
→ Large groups, People interrupting his composing, people listening to his music, People, Military.

DEEPEST SECRET:
→ Looking for a place to belong in a world he hates and loves.

IDOL:
→ None

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HISTORY:
→ Veil grew up in a military home, his father was a Intel Officer and his mother a Alchemist Scientist. As a child Veil loved music especially the flute and on his fifth birthday his mother got him a flute and signed him up for lessons. His parents were proud of there son who spoke only of music and one day even playing for a large amount of people and his parents in the front. His father and mother often brought there work home with them and as a child's intrigue grew he began to sneak down to his parents work room at the age of nine and start to read there books.

A year went by of Veil studying his parents work before he was finally caught by his parents who after a discussion began to teach there young son more about the science and more importantly the art of Alchemy. Veil soon fell into Alchemy as hard as he did with his music and the next few years was a blast as he fell into his own Alchemy. Veil had the perfect life, a family that loved him, a good home and two callings he was happy to follow. Then the war started and with it death, explosions, and fear. War brought casualties and destruction and even more death. Veil lost his father in the war and it started to push young Veil into his own mind. His only solitude was his mother and music and as the war raged on Veil leaped into the study of Alchemy driving for a way to protect the only family he had.

His power came from the music he loved and thrived on it forming his own specialty in Sound Alchemy. Through it he learned all ways of protecting his mother and home. When a group of soldiers came to his house Veil met them outside and using his flute he crushed there ear drums causing them to scream. He finished them off with a high pitch sound that actually broke there skulls. Once finished he simply turned around and went inside. The war continued and young Veil grew to a young man with a broken mind and a talent he once used for fun was now his most potent weapon. Veil was asked to join the military and his answer was simple he closed the door. Veil's mother finally came out of her shock after four years and went back to work. Veil decided he had enough of home life and signed up with the military. Though he hasn't been there long he is determined to one day be a great Alchemist.


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ALCHEMIC ABILITY:
→Veil is a Sound Alchemist and due to his talent uses Sound as a weapon. Veil creates high frequency sounds that penetrate the brain and drop people into a deep sleep. The sleep will last up to a hour after he stops playing the flute. The sound is able to reach through metal, stone, and even plastic. Anyone who hears the tune falls into a deep sleep. Even ear covers don't help much since it can reverberate via bone by vibrating it into the ears.

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TRIVIA:
→ Veil is actually clinically insane and switches from normal to a broken mind quite quickly especially in stressful situations.

Cretan

Creig/Gaelic

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ALIAS:
→ Veil

OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ First character

CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ No

FACE CLAIM:[*code]SERIES/ARTIST/character[/code*] (Take out the * and this message)

CUSTOM RANK:
→ None

OFFICIAL TITLE:
→ The Sound Alchemist

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Post by Reila Tsukino Sun Aug 14, 2011 2:18 pm

REVISE

1. Add lyrics or quote at the top.
2. Picture: it's not working, fix it.
3. Description: 150 words minimum.
4. Personality: 300 words minimum.
5. Idol: put one or none.
6. History: 450 words minimum. Also, there are not state alchemists in Creta, so his father couldn't have been one.
7. Alchemic ability: You have 6. Pick one and explain it more. I'm not convinced at all.
8. Trivia: You can't have the same color for two different languages.
9. Creator's comments: fill it out.

Cool ideas~
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Post by Reila Tsukino Mon Aug 15, 2011 1:57 pm

If you want to be in the military, put a slash and add Cretan Militant at the top next to Alchemist. And then post in classifieds under Creta.
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Post by Reila Tsukino Mon Aug 15, 2011 11:44 pm

APPROVED

You don't have a picture so send me the link in the cbox or via PM and I'll add it in for you.
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Post by Reila Tsukino Mon Aug 15, 2011 11:44 pm

Rolling rank...
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