Veil Awaikage

FULL NAME:
→ Veil Awaikage. (Real name: Makuro Tsukino)

AGE:
→ 23
SEX:
→ Male

BIRTH PLACE:
→ Aurego

RACE:
→ Auregese

DATE OF BIRTH:
→ August 3rd 1980



HEIGHT:
→ 153cm

WEIGHT:
→ 82kg (mostly due to automail)

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Description:
→ A short man with orange hair and bright red eyes. Despite his age what remains of his body is that of a teenager. His skin is pale and over his head he wears a grey helmet. A visor covers his left eye, and the helmet covers the remaining part of the left half of his face as well. This is because of what is beneath, a robotic face made of automail. He is commonly seen wearing a black jacket with white fur on the collar over a yellow top. With this he wears white combats with black camoflague markings covering them.

At his waist is a tachi and a tanto blade, which he uses with skill and a pair of .45 caliber pistols. He is incredibly accurate with these. This is most likely due to his robotic eye, which is designed to heighten his accuracy. His face is not the only automail on him. His arms and legs are all automail, with the fingers able to extend claws and the knees being able to fire bullets.



PERSONALITY:
→ A naturally cruel individual with a superiority complex that defines himself. He believes himself, as royalty, to be above everyone except his parents. This complex extends to others as well. He believes the lowliest beggar of Aurego to be far greater then any person in Amestris or Xing. He is cruel to his enemies and treats no-one below him with any respect. His army is ruled by fear of him not of loyalty. This is due to his cruel punishments due to failure, betrayal and insubordination. No-one knows of his automail and most believe he merely possesses inhuman strength along with the ability to manipulate light and shadow.

He believes in perfection of himself and the parts of his body which aren't automail he trains regularly to keep them in perfect condition. He wants to conquer the south so he can get an expert mechanic from rush valley to make his automail stronger then ever and give it more upgrades. He also seeks to get revenge on his cousin Reila for her 'betrayal' and he knows she is a high-ranking member of the Amestrian army so seeks for a way to lure her out. He knows little of right and wrong due to how he was raised and will do whatever he feels is necessary to get his goals even if to everyone it seems evil.

He does not believe in wastage either. If his soldiers are killed he uses the iron in their blood to create resources for his army. He also does this with his opponents. His prefferred fighting technique is to get in close and manipulate the iron in his opponent's body to kill them. However, he is also fond of killing them with his swords or his guns. Anyway works for him as long as they die in agony.

LOVE:
→ Aurego, Controlling people, Family, Swords, Pistols, Pain of others

HATE:
→ Amestris, Machine guns, Xing, Weakness, Wasteage.

DEEPEST SECRET:
→ He was born incredibly frail and his body was distorted. It was due to this that he was given automail at a young age. He tells others that he was injured during battle.



HISTORY:
→ He was born to the royal family of Aurego with a weak and deformed body. His parents thought he would die, but fortunately when he was 8 they found a way for him to survive and kidnapped a travelling automail mechanic who created the mechanical parts that would allow him to function. These parts were made slightly too big for him so they would function when he was older. Unfortunately, when he reached the age of 14 his body stopped growing, which annoyed him greatly, but it meant that he did not have to have any new automail made. He forced the mechanic to teach him how to maintain the automail and to add certain functions such as the shooting. After he knew this and had practised for a while he killed the mechanic so that his secret would not be known to anyone, but his parents. The automail was not the secret, the reason for having it was however.

This crime was usually severely punished however as a prince he never got such punishment. Instead, his 'playmate', a child kidnapped from a village was instead. It is due to this child and his use of the mechanic that he began to develop a like of controlling and manipulating people to get his will and mastered this skill quite heavily. It was not the only skill he mastered. Through reading and training he became skilled in alchemy focusing on the manipulation of iron and also trained with the tanto and tachi combo. However, he knew when he reached age 20 that these two would not be enough to win against Amestris where his hated sister had gone to and so he developed his marksmanship skills able to use almost any gun except an automatic weapon with ease and precision.

When he was younger at about 12 years of age the car-crash occured which killed Reila's parents and gave the throne to Makuro's parents thus making him the prince and her the pauper, though she was still part of the royal family her status was severely diminished especially when she went to Amestris.

At the age of 20 his father the Royal Commander of the Auregese army and King of Aurego fell ill leaving command of the army to Makuro. However, as he was not acting as royalty, but as a commander for the army he forged himself the new name Veil Awaikage. This was because he kept his secrets under a veil of mystery, but people called him Crimson Lord Vile instead a title he greatly admired. He has ruled the army with an iron fist of fear and cruelty for three years and those who think of betrayal do not because they fear his wrath. He sets his sights on conquering the now weakened south and has arranged a diversion via an attack on Briggs in order to further weaken the South's defences.




ALCHEMIC ABILITY:
→ Manipulation of Iron, particularly of that in the bloodstream.



ALIAS:
→ His Highness, Blood Prince, Iron Fist, Crimson Lord Vile, Blood Alchemist, Lord Vile

OTHER CHARACTERS:
→ Houka Yochi
Aki deducted points already.
CREATOR'S COMMENTS:
→ Erm...nope not really

CUSTOM RANK:
→ Lord Vile: Blood Prince of Aurego

REVISE


Perrrffecttt! Except one thing.
History needs to be 450 words! ;o; And you might want to add what I'm about to say to it anyway.

Sososo Veil is too old to be Reila's younger brother. So I figure you'd still want him to be 29, so here's the solution:
Let's say... Reila's parents died in a car accident soon after they ditched Reila and then Reila's uncle became the emperor, thinking she was dead. So he's her cousin? XD Hey, it still works... I mean Reila is 20 and I can't really change her age. Nine years is a huge difference!

Ok i'll add that in and add more to history.

That could work...afterall...despite him being the older she might of treated him as the younger due to the fact he still looks about 14 despite being 29.

Edited. Also reduced his age slightly. 29 seemed too old. I reduced it to 23.

Looks good to me.